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09.03.14. Stopgap by Verschroben 09.03.14. Stopgap by Verschroben
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Good use of color. I like the mood it sets and the posture of the model. The hair is excellent. My general opinion? Wow!

Improvements? The head looks a little flat. The forehead feels like it ends prematurely. The iris blends into the background quite a bit. I'm not sure if that's intentional or not. As in, it looks unintentional. I'd suggest making the iris dark brown or some other color that'll make it pop against the background. If the eye were looking at the viewer, that may also improve it.

Oh! And the red spots on her cheek nose are a nice touch. They give the general impression that it's chilly where she is, or that perhaps she wears glasses (since the red mark on the side of the nose is the mark a person might typically have if they wear glasses often.) The texture on the jacket is also nice, though it does get blocky and a bit "unfinished" looking in places- especially the arm- but that could just be the style.

The back of the neck where the collar of the jacket and the hair meet is really *really* well done. There's a nice sense of folding and weight there.
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ArchieOctopus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
I luuuuuuv this artwork. She has such a cool expression and the details are just awesome. That's the kind of portrait that makes me think 'just give a minute and I invent her a life'. <3
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Yuki-Yojik Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014   Digital Artist
Nice!
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Verschroben Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks.
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LotsOfLowe Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Great job! :D
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Verschroben Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks.
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notrab Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Just so beautiful and flawless :)
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Verschroben Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you.
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MindlessKate Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
она прекрасна *_*
великолепный рисунок! Очень красиво и живо получилось, вот и вся моя крытика)
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Verschroben Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Спасибо. Я совру, если скажу, что мне не нравится такая критика. Х)
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MindlessKate Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ахахах) ну и отлично)
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alebat Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014   General Artist
The wrinkles on the jacket are so dang perfect I want to cry this is beautiful
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Verschroben Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot. <3
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Rogerrr57 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
Fantastic work
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Verschroben Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks.
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Desperish Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
I really love the way you coloured the jacket and their lips. Such fantastic brushstrokes.
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Verschroben Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks, man!~
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